[advocacy-discuss] About pages final review request

[Ben Rockwood]

Michelle Olson wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I've incorporated the last few changes from OGB and posted the draft 
> content here: http://stage.opensolaris.org/os. Please take a look at the 
> pages in the 'Overview' section of the left navigation bar and send 
> final comments by Friday. Any and all comments are welcome.
>   

Here are my comments, take them as you please:

* About page: Looks fine.  Might want to change "free, open source,
..."  You mean to say "no cost, open source", but could be construed as
"free software".  This is a minor nit to be sure.

* Values: The list is limp at best.  Innovation is one of our core
values.  How about integrity?  The list, as presented, might as well be
omitted, imho.


benr.


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