[advocacy-discuss] About pages final review request

[Michelle Olson]

Ben Rockwood wrote:
> Michelle Olson wrote:
>   
>> Hi all,
>>
>> I've incorporated the last few changes from OGB and posted the draft 
>> content here: http://stage.opensolaris.org/os. Please take a look at the 
>> pages in the 'Overview' section of the left navigation bar and send 
>> final comments by Friday. Any and all comments are welcome.
>>   
>>     
>
> Here are my comments, take them as you please:
>
> * About page: Looks fine.  Might want to change "free, open source,
> ..."  You mean to say "no cost, open source", but could be construed as
> "free software".  This is a minor nit to be sure.
>
> * Values: The list is limp at best.  Innovation is one of our core
> values.  How about integrity?  The list, as presented, might as well be
> omitted, imho.
>
>
> benr.
>
>
>   
Hiya Ben,

 I've added a section for values (Innovation, Integrity, and Quality).  
Tomorrow, I'll work on the text, please send along any content or 
pointers you have that I could use to get started. Thanks for your time 
to review!

-Michelle