[advocacy-discuss] About pages final review request

[Michelle Olson]

Michelle Olson wrote:
> Ben Rockwood wrote:
>   
>> Michelle Olson wrote:
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>>     
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> I've incorporated the last few changes from OGB and posted the draft 
>>> content here: http://stage.opensolaris.org/os. Please take a look at the 
>>> pages in the 'Overview' section of the left navigation bar and send 
>>> final comments by Friday. Any and all comments are welcome.
>>>   
>>>     
>>>       
>> Here are my comments, take them as you please:
>>
>> * About page: Looks fine.  Might want to change "free, open source,
>> ..."  You mean to say "no cost, open source", but could be construed as
>> "free software".  This is a minor nit to be sure.
>>
>> * Values: The list is limp at best.  Innovation is one of our core
>> values.  How about integrity?  The list, as presented, might as well be
>> omitted, imho.
>>
>>
>> benr.
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>>     
> Hiya Ben,
>
>  I've added a section for values (Innovation, Integrity, and Quality).  
> Tomorrow, I'll work on the text, please send along any content or 
> pointers you have that I could use to get started. Thanks for your time 
> to review!
>
> -Michelle
>
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Hi all,

Per Ben's feedback I've drafted a new section about our values (Quality 
and Invention). I mention integrity in the introductory paragraph, but I 
don't have an entire section for it because listing integrity as a value 
is redundant. Any and all comments welcomed:

http://stage.opensolaris.org/os/about/values/

Thanks in advance,
Michelle