[advocacy-discuss] About pages final review request

[John Plocher]

Michelle Olson wrote:
 > ... updated ...

"We encourage everyone to embrace the values ..."

There are a lot of "must"s in the text that follows this encouragement.
As written, there is little to argue against, but it comes across
as a dictate from above rather than a vision that is shared by all.

I don't have time tonight to compose an alternative, but I will try to
do so tomorrow afternoon - unless someone more articulate than I
does it first :-)

   -John