[advocacy-discuss] About pages final review request

[michelle olson]

John Plocher wrote:
> Michelle Olson wrote:
>  > ... updated ...
>
> "We encourage everyone to embrace the values ..."
>
> There are a lot of "must"s in the text that follows this encouragement.
> As written, there is little to argue against, but it comes across
> as a dictate from above rather than a vision that is shared by all.
>
> I don't have time tonight to compose an alternative, but I will try to
> do so tomorrow afternoon - unless someone more articulate than I
> does it first :-)
>
>    -John
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Hi John,

Thanks for this feedback, agreed. I'll work on reforming these 'must' 
code requirements into phrasing that is more consistent with the tone of 
the conduct code.

Regards,
Michelle