[content-discuss] [docs-discuss] review request: splash page for May

[Rafael Vanoni]

Hi Michele

I think the visual result is very good and that all major areas of 
opensolaris.org have been successfully identified.

I'd like to suggest the following:
- add a section for user groups and country portals under one of the pages
- consider using "participate" instead of "contribute", as the former 
has a stronger two-way connotation
- include pointer(s) to where the user can find information and download 
the other distributions

Congrats again, it looks very good :)

thanks
Rafael


michelle olson wrote:
> Hi all,
> 
> As part of my work on the opensolaris website project, we've drafted a 
> splash page and 4 landing pages to go live in May. This is a stop-gap 
> measure for short-term, and I could use your help to improve the 
> content. (Long-term, we'll do a full site audit and usability study for 
> new navigation). Any and all feedback is encouraged and appreciated! 
> Here's the draft:
> 
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/splash2/
> 
> Thanks in advance for your time to review and feedback! I can take 
> comments through next Weds.
> 
> Regards,
> Michelle Olson
> OpenSolaris website project leader