[edu-discuss] final review: OSOL INTRO OS mini-book

[Michelle.Olson at Sun.COM]

Hi all,

This is the final review cycle for the new version of 'Introduction to 
Operating Systems: A Hands-On Approach Using the OpenSolaris Project'. 
I've incorporated alpha and beta review comments, re-structured the 
document, and added new content listed in the summary below. See
http://opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/OSOLINTROOS.pdf

Summary of changes:

-new placeholder for user group graphic
-new content for networking, userland consolidations, country portals, 
and source repositories
-moved mktg content into new Advocacy module 2
-ZFS procedures completely updated
-moved module 3 to module 4
-collapsed modules 6,4,5 into 7 and moved to module 3
-2nd half of doc virtually unchanged, except appendix for resources.

If you have the time, please consider:
-Does the 'Planning the OSOL environment' module work? Is it overloaded?
-Is the introduction to the 'Userland Consolidations' module true?

Thank you all for your continued help and feedback--the doc is really 
improved by all of your voices and contributions! Send new changes to 
the docs-discuss list.

Regards,
Michelle Olson
OpenSolaris Documentation Community Leader