[install-discuss] Re: install doc review request

[Michelle Olson]

Hi Dave,

you wrote:  
>
>First, the link to provide feedback for the starter kit documentation is 
>incorrect, it points the "Intro to Operating Systems..." feedback 
>thread.  So my feedback is coming this way instead.

Drat! I've fixed that now. Thanks for responding on this list instead.

>
>Second, given the short deadline for review, I only had time to skim 
>this very quickly.  Two things that I noticed:
>
>- The page on repartitioning didn't make any recommendation of how much 
>space to make available for OpenSolaris.

I appreciate this comment, it was made by another reviewer also, so this will be fixed with a recommendation. The other reviewer also suggested a discussion or pointer to information about layouts and partition numbering.

>
>- The Configuring Xorg for nVidia page has a subhead of "Configuring 
>Wireless Networking..." which is clearly incorrect.

Thanks, fixed.
>
>The navigation feels odd - Next/Prev within sections, but then I have to 
>go off to some TOC to get to the next section.

Right, the formatting is for a standalone HTML wrapper that is weird in the opensolaris.org setup. Sorry about that, I traded pretty for time.
>
>There are likely other things that I might have found, but that's all 
>the time I have before today's deadline.  If you have another round with 
>a slightly longer timeframe in which to schedule review, I'd be happy to 
>comment further.

I really appreciate your help with this. I will post updated files and send another message tonight.  

Regards,
Michelle
 
 
This message posted from opensolaris.org