[osol-mktg] anniv. news content final draft for review
Bonnie Corwin
Bonnie.Corwin at Sun.COM
Mon Jun 5 15:06:53 PDT 2006
Hi Michelle,
I like this a lot. And my apologies - I had not checked out the
doc_index page recently - it's looking really good.
Just one suggestion: "...check out the community documentation 'about'
build and installation...." instead of 'of'.
Bonnie
Michelle Olson wrote On 06/05/06 15:56,:
> BigAdmin Newsletter: Community Submissions
>
> <a
> href="http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/doc_index/
> install/"Learn to Build and Install OpenSolaris</a>
>
> It's already been a year since Sun open sourced Solaris. The
> OpenSolaris community is thriving with challenging projects and
> contributions that are driving the next generation of operating
> system
> innovation. Have you checked out the OpenSolaris code yet? --Go to
> www.opensolaris.org/os/downloads to get the most recent source
> files...and check out the community documentation of build
> and installation processes for the OpenSolaris code and distributions.
>
>
> SDN Network Program Newsletter: [section: Resources?]
>
> It's already been a year since Sun open sourced Solaris. The
> OpenSolaris community is thriving with challenging projects and
> innovation that's being included in Solaris 10. Have you checked
> out the innovation found in Solaris 10? --Go to
> www.opensolaris.org/os/downloads to get
> the most recent source code and the tools you need. Check out the
> community documentation of build and installation
> processes for the OpenSolaris code and distributions. See for
> yourself at:
> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/doc_index/install
>
> Thoughts?
>
> Thanks,
> Michelle
>
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