[osol-mktg] anniv. news content final draft for review

[Bonnie Corwin]

Hi Michelle,

I like this a lot.  And my apologies - I had not checked out the
doc_index page recently - it's looking really good.

Just one suggestion: "...check out the community documentation 'about'
build and installation...."  instead of 'of'.

Bonnie


Michelle Olson wrote On 06/05/06 15:56,:
>  BigAdmin Newsletter: Community Submissions
>  
>  <a 
> href="http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/doc_index/
>  install/"Learn to Build and Install OpenSolaris</a>
>  
>  It's already been a year since Sun open sourced Solaris. The 
>  OpenSolaris community is thriving with challenging projects and 
>  contributions that are driving the next generation of operating 
> system 
>  innovation. Have you checked out the OpenSolaris code yet?  --Go to 
>  www.opensolaris.org/os/downloads to get the most recent source 
> files...and check out the community documentation of build 
> and installation processes for the OpenSolaris code and distributions.
> 
> 
>  SDN Network Program Newsletter: [section: Resources?]
>  
>  It's already been a year since Sun open sourced Solaris. The 
>  OpenSolaris community is thriving with challenging projects and 
>  innovation that's being included in Solaris 10. Have you checked 
> out the innovation found in Solaris 10?  --Go to 
> www.opensolaris.org/os/downloads to get 
> the most recent source code and the tools you need. Check out the 
> community documentation of build and installation 
> processes for the OpenSolaris code and distributions. See for 
> yourself at: 
> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/doc_index/install
> 
> Thoughts? 
> 
> Thanks,
> Michelle
> 
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