[osol-mktg] Banner Ad Poll

[Bonnie Corwin]

Dennis Clarke wrote:
>>Moazam Raja wrote:
>>
>>>Wow, that's a bit odd. I liked the original 5 word headline better but
>>>oh well.
>>
>>Since we have "open" in the second line, I thought getting it out of the
>>1st was OK.
> 
> 
> I don't think so.
> 
> I wanted the words in the first line to match the timing of the second line.
> The amount of time it take to read the first line as well as the rhythm of
> the syllables matches well with the rhythm and timings of the second line.
> 
> If you delete a word in either case ( or add a word ) then the timing and
> rhyme becomes awkward.

I agree with Dennis - changing this to accomodate just four words pretty 
much does away with the lines/message Dennis wrote.  And that will 
probably be true of most of the options on the poll page.

Can we use Dennis' original wording somewhere else in another manner?

And see if we can think of any four words that would work as a banner ad?

Just wondering.

Bonnie

> 
> yep, I really am not just making this up.  :-)
> 
> Dennis
> 
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