[pkg-discuss] [indiana-discuss] Indiana Documentation Review

[Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM]

Thank you!! I'll go thru your edits and respond. I'll leave this off the 
group aliases unless there's a significant issue that needs discussion.
Barbara


Joseph J VLcek wrote:
> Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM wrote:
>> Indiana Participants:
>>
>> 1)  Please review the documentation that we are developing for 
>> OpenSolaris 2008.05 release, and email your edits and comments to us 
>> by Friday, 4/25. Feedback received after 4/25 may not be integrated 
>> in time for the May release.
>>
>> The documentation is available for review in HTML and .pdf.
>>
>> HTML format is available at:
>> http://dlc.sun.com/osol/docs/content/IPS/getst1.html
>>
>> .pdf format is available at:
>> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/indiana/files/
>> Note: Please ignore the Sun logo on .pdf copy. The final 
>> documentation will be in the OpenSolaris HTML format.
>>
>> This documentation includes three main sections:
>>      Getting Started with installing OpenSolaris 2008.05 (owner: 
>> Barbara)
>>      Image Packaging System documentation (owner: Jyothi)
>>      Upgrading and Managing Multiple Boot Environments (owner: Barbara)
>>
>> 2) We are looking for more examples for the "Creating an IPS Package" 
>> section. In particular, send us specific examples of creating an IPS 
>> package for a C application or a Web Stack application and publishing 
>> to an IPS repository.
>>
>> 3) Please also review and send suggestions about Michelle Olson's new 
>> main documentation hub at:
>>
>> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/doc_splash/   
>> This page replaces the "Gateway to Indiana" page on the Project  
>> Indiana site, although the "Gateway to Indiana" page will be  updated 
>> for 2008.05.
>>
>> Note:   The documentation is developed in a prototype mercurial 
>> repository. For the May release, email us your edits. After the May 
>> release, we'll open this repository to interested contributers.
>>
>> Barbara Lundquist
>> Jyothi Srinath
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>
>
> Barbara,
>
> My comments are in the attached text file. The document looks very 
> good and I think will be very helpful to new users. Much of what I 
> have are simple nits. I tried to read through this with the 
> perspective of a new user.
>
> I still have to read through the last 10 pages or so and will do that 
> tomorrow, Friday 4/25 AM
>
> Joe VLcek
>
>