[website-discuss] pl conference feature spot review
Jim Grisanzio
Jim.Grisanzio at Sun.COM
Mon Oct 13 22:37:21 PDT 2008
On 2008?10?14? 08:29, John Plocher wrote:
> Michelle Olson wrote:
>
>> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft12/
>>
>
>
> Nit: Could you use names that mean something for these drafts, like
>
> .../feature_spot_pl_conference_draft
>
>
>> Let me know what you think.
>>
>
> I really like the drop shadowed picture!
>
> How much of "in Szczecin, ul. Korsarzy 34 Sala Anny Jagiellonki, Zamek
> Ksia;z.a;t Pomorskich, Wste;p wolny" is a city location and how much is
> a street address? I'd leave off the details (which should be on the
> conference page as well) in favor of simplicity (in the same way we'd
> say "come to JavaOne in San Francisco" or maybe "come to JavaOne at
> the Moscone in San Francisco", but not "Come to JavaOne in the
> basement of the Moscone Conference Center, 747 Howard Street, San
> Francisco, CA between 3rd and 4th streets"
>
yah, I like shortening that first sentence, too. Great that we are
putting so much community stuff on the front page ...
Jim
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